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    September 21

    Writing to Justin’s stories

     

    Story 1   eating peach’s money

     

    Long long ago, A group of monkey is play on hill.lots of  flowers is open.in there.monkeys eating flowers.green and so on.they on and on dancing and singing,sunflower is high in flowers,very beautiful. Sunshine on monkey face.

       Suddenly have a day,blow wind.coil they go to sky. Fly and fly ,they sleep in sky .wind take they to far field. When monkeys is wake up. They discove there lots of tree in hill.but no flower. The ae very hurgry. Then they look for food, this time have a bith fly here fall on tree,looking for bug.

    Monkey ask the bird. What this can eating .we from long field.

    The bird said

    :”peach can eating it.but them have been flower , then get fruit.so you don’t eating it.if eating ,then no fruit eating.”

    “but no flower no fruit now.”

    “under tree have fall feaf ,maybe you can look for these dry fruit eating this time.”


    thanks

    Now monkey start look for dry fruit.

    Lucky for they, find fruit. Choose dry peach on stone.then they give tree is water and turn earth.

    Time like fly go.

    Peach flower and fruit peach day and day then grow up.

    Monkeys altogether eating peach.

    Lollllll

    Peach is nice fruit. It is than flower is nice food.

    Wonderful!

    Afterwards. Monkey keep eating peach’s habit.

     

     

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